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How Christians should Vote (and why you should care)

I would imagine that, at the time, every single election seems like the most important one to date, but the upcoming election seems to be more momentous than usual. Phrases like “uncharted territory” have been popping up which really raises the stakes and makes this upcoming election seem like it just may carry a little more weight than others. Not to mention the fact that we are embroiled in a war we can’t escape with a couple more potentially on the way. For most Christians this election is more than just an economic or leadership issue, it’s a moral issue.

I only have one election under my belt, so this is only my second experience with media during campaign season. It truly is a sight to behold. Unfortunately, there is a corresponding reaction within the churches I have attended when campaign season rolls around. There is always this push to elect the right candidate, the Godliest candidate. Typically, if not always, this is of course the Republican, which always confused me growing up because Jesus rode on a donkey, so wouldn’t that make him a democrat?

Whatever your beliefs are, you cannot ignore the Christian vote. It will affect you.

A little more than three quarters of the United States population identifies themselves as being associated with some form of Christianity. From a candidate’s perspective that is a big chunk of votes ripe for the taking. Whether or not a person identifies with their faith above other things, playing the God card probably doesn’t hurt a candidate’s chances of getting elected (in fact not playing the God card would probably destroy a candidate’s chances for election). Whether you are a Christian or not, this should trouble you. Most of the people in America are going to vote based on who they think the Godlier candidate is, and those running for office understand this. They will identify themselves in some way with Christianity, which is really just pandering to voters because in no way do either of our two major presidential candidates represent Christ.

In fact, I can’t imagine Jesus having anything to do with a political system. I wonder what Jesus would have to say about democracy being equated with sacrificial love.

I have only been pursuing Christianity seriously for a few years, when I started I didn’t really know what I was getting myself into. Since then I have been trying to figure out what Christianity is exactly.At first it was presented to me as a moral shock collar that we needed to put around everyone's necks. It was for the good of mankind that we let everyone know how wrong they were and how right we were.We had to vote to keep God in office and sign petitions to keep homosexuals from ruining the sanctity of marriage (It breaks my heart now to think that petition was in a church, let alone the fact that I signed it).I'm a little more educated on this guy Jesus that we are supposed to be following now. Because of what I have learned I no longer believe that Christianity and Democracy can coexist. If you participate in one, you abhor the other, whether you are aware of it or not. Unfortunately, I think that most Christians think their main duty as so is to make sure that the right candidates are in office. If you can get someone representing your morals into office then you have done your job and you can sleep soundly at night in your heated home with a two car garage and fully stocked refrigerator.

However Jesus did not operate in this manner, and as far as we can see in the biblical narrative, neither does God. Jesus lead by example and taught to love through sacrifice, not by force. God for free will, there is no force.Democracy forces the will of the majority on all. This is not sacrificial love. This is not leading by example. This is legislative rape.
No wonder Christianity is losing any relevancy in the modern world. It was started as an alternative to empire, to free the oppressed, yet it now has its boot on the neck of the weak waving an American flag.
Now, I am not saying that if one is a Christian one cannot participate in electing officials. I understand in order to live in this community we live in called America we need people to run it, and by all means vote for whoever you want, but if you are a Christian who you vote for is of little or no consequence as it pertains to your Christianity. You can only put your faith in one system or the other. Whichever one you choose forces the other to become a novelty.
In order to make society a better place, to bring heaven to earth, we have to vote every single day with our actions.

Vote pro-life by caring for teenage mothers, single mothers or any mothers who are contemplating abortion. Only if we respond to the situation that creates the seemingly necessary abortion will we ever have a chance of saving lives.If you want to save the sanctity of marriage take yours seriously. Divorce is more common among Christians than non-Christians.

Vote for a better economy by living apart from the empire.

Vote for a better world by taking care of everyone you see in the same way that you take care of yourself. Democracy and Christianity are incompatible, only one can be followed seriously at a time.